Tome,+Fernanda

(4 pts) || Developing (3 pts) || Emerging (2 pts) || Experimenting (0 pt) ||
 * || Experienced (5 pts) || Capable
 * Timeliness

4/5 || 7 – 8 of the entries are posted within the time period assigned. || 5 - 6 of the entries are posted within the time period assigned. || 3 - 4 of the entries are posted within the time period assigned. || 1 - 2of the entries are posted within the time period assigned. || None of the entries are posted within the time period assigned. ||
 * Completion

4/5 || All entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner. || More than half of the entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner. || Some of the entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner. || Less than half of the entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner. || None of the entries are completed in fluent, cohesive, grade appropriate manner. ||
 * Explanation of Evidence

4/5 || All of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place. || More than half of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place. || Some of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place. || Less than half of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place. || None of the entries are written in a manner that thoroughly explains the event that took place. ||
 * Authenticity of Evidence

5/5 || All of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience. || More than half of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience. || Some of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience. || Less than half of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience. || None of the entries give evidence of an event that truly exhibits an authentic English experience. ||
 * Style, voice, creativity

4/5 || All of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality. || More than half of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality. || Some of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality. || Less than half of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality. || None of the entries are written and displayed with creativity, originality, and a sense of the author’s personality. ||
 * TOTAL:

21/25 ||  ||   ||   ||   ||   ||

FIRST WEEK JUNE1-7 For the first week I finally read the last book of the series __Pretty Little Liars__ which is about four girls (Spencer,Aria,Emily and Hanna) who lived in Rosewood and were in middle school they became really popular thanks to a girl named Alison DiLaurentis but during one of their famous sleepovers Alison gets killed after three years of Alison death the girls begin recieveng weird texts with secrets only Ali knew and the texts are signed -A they suspect that Allison is not dead and find out someone they never knew existed could be the one harming their lives.

SECOND WEEK JUNE8-14 At the end of the second week of my summer vacation I spent it at San Francisco with my cousin and grandmother who lives there. It was lots of fun considering the fact I met a big part of my family that I never knew I had. They are a little older than I am they are mostly in college but we all still got to hang out alot we had barbecues sleepovers and parties I also went sightseeing with them because I havent been there in about two years so I didnt remember that much but most of all I got to spend it with my great-grandmother and learn alot of her families history which I never expected to know that I have family descendants from really random places! :)

THIRD WEEK JUNE15-21 The third week I went to the fathers day celebration which was also alot of fun because I saw my other part of the family that i had not seen since about 6 years ago. That was a very fun day we had dinner and we danced alot and i got to catch-up with my two counsins who are now in college.Before that we just spent the whole day in the library logged in to facebook.

FOURTH WEEK JUNE22-28 The third week I was still in San Francisco this was the day we went to the San Francisco Bay area we took a cruise around The Golden Gate Bridge,Angel Island, Tiburon and a famous place called Alcatraz which used to be the prison that kept the most dangerous prisoners like the famous Al Capone and Machine Gun Kelly. The only bad part was I could not take the cruise that took you just too alcatraz and you could go down and explore the whole entire prison which I was looking forward too.

FIFTH WEEK JUNE29-JULY5 The fifth week of my summer I was in Washington D.C. and I spent two weeks there. One of the days my parents decided to take us to the Holocaust it 4 floors of stories from the holocaust it was very sad to hear what all those people went through and their was alot of evidence gathered like scissors the uniforms shoes toothbrushes and it was very chilly in their because they wanted to make you feel like you were in that time and they wanted you too feel like one of the prisioners also their was a part where they took you into a place called the ghetto and they told you about a boy named Daniel and what he and his family went through everybody that left the museum was crying including me because it was horrible their was a part in which they had a big picture of the disposed bodies and a bucket which they said was the actually the victims hair it was nasty but sad.

SIXTH WEEK JULY6-12

The sixth week I was still in Washington but went to New York City for the weekend it was alot of fun because it was my first time there. We went to this museum Madame Tussauds which is a wax museum of famous people it was alot of fun and their was also historic people and you got to learn alot. We also went on the tour buses and went to central park.

SEVENTH WEEK JULY13-19 The seventh week I was back in Washington D.C.and we went to the International Spy Museum it was alot of fun you played a spy and you had to find something that was stolen so you read encrypted calls survailence videos made interrogations searched places and other stuff. and then you went to learn about spy information about old techiniques and the ones now a days then we had lunch at the musuems cafes.

EIGHTH WEEK JULY20-26 The eighth and last week I went with my brother to see Despicable Me which is about a villan who is trying to steal the moon with a shrinking gun but he did not have enough money to make the rocket to steal it.He was told at the villlan bank he would only get the money if he could prove he had that gun. So he tries to steal it from chineese people and ends up getting it stolen from another villan.So he came up with the plan to adopt some homeless kids and go undercover to the villans house by selling cookies so he could get the gun back.but he ended up bonding with the kids Then he returns to the bank with the gun but they wont help to build the rocket so he finds a way goes to the moon and returns to find the villan he stole the gun from kidnapped the girls.